MORTAL COIL [Demo.]

for some reason I never expected the words ‘Vtuber’ and ‘death game’ to appear in the same game but they have and it’s beautiful – solid prose and really well-crafted characters! will be looking out for the full game >:o

I really enjoyed it! The characters and story were so immersive and fun (maybe fun's not the right word lol). The history log was a bit clunky looking, but I understand that not many people will see it anyways. Also, I don't know if this is because I'm stupid but I got stuck on the e-mail for like, ten minutes because I didn't notice the X

cool setting, great graphics! not finished yet, might comment again later

Wow. Just, wow.

The characters are very well written and very distinct from each other.

I really, really liked the contrast between photographs and drawings between the real world and the cyber-dreamspace-internet. Wonderful attention to detail.

Also I'm a sucker for synthwave/vaporwave stuff, and the aesthetic is top notch.

I really, really enjoyed it. However, I have a couple nitpicks, which are very minor but I think would add some polish to the experience:

• It can be a bit confusing to distinguish spoken words and internal monologue just by separating with quotes. I think it would be much better to make shorter textboxes that contain only spoken words or only internal monologue
• The game can feel a bit static at times: consider adding some more sound effects, parallaxes or moving objects a bit more frequently. I have never tried ren'py (although your game really made me want to check it out) so I don't know how difficult it is.

(the ending part of the demo was a tad predictable, but that just means you've made a very well fleshed-out world)

Bravi. I'll be keeping an eye out for when it comes out. 

Beautifully immersive and compelling game! Really sucks you in with its well-paced twists and world-building.

Highly recommend!